Reflections: Interperting this literature is difficult if not carefully read and deciphered. Through my first reading I thought the author was just telling about the life after death, then once read again I realized that the death is apart of their cultural and is worshipped in their culture.
Dear Diary,
After reading this poem, I realize what it means now to die in my culture. Before I thought that once you died you laid in the ground and degrated, but after reading one of my own's poem I am aware that once you descend from the physical world you are later living again by being called to join the other gods and become one yourself. Until my reading of this poem I never felt so connected to the ones that have passed in my tribes, and now I am able to tell the ones in my family to not shed tears of sorrow but tears of joy, because our tribal warriors have left here to be a better warrior that looks upon us.

4 comments:
I feel that you really did a good job on this, connecting with the character of an native American. You really understand where the author was coming from. I love that in your diary you really took the role of an indian.But For your reflection you probably could add more too it but other wise you did an fantastic job.
Your poem was excellent and portrayed the true traditions of an Indian. In your diary you really connected to the way an Indian lives their life. In addition, you conveyed the emotions that they felt when going through death. You showed how they didn’t just mourn for the dead, but instead how they celebrated the gift of life. Your reflection was good in the sense that you compared your culture to the Indians, but you could have elaborated more.
lillian
your diary entry is very insightful - very sensitive - I like it. Can you connect it further to your reaction as a native american as you experience the white man coming to the new land?
Reflection needs to be expanded.
You also need an essential question.
I like the the title of your blog. Good job. Keep on working.
Grade 89
Ms. Mic
Lillian,
I certainly loved the way you connected yourself to the native american culture. I felt as though i were truly listening to the views of a native american. Your reflection was good, but could probably use some more elaboration. I just can't get over the way you connected, so I'll most likely try to incoperate that into my blog. Great Work!!
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